Derek, you’ve seen Alison faint/loose consciousness two times within the past few days and almost faint earlier today, she’s not gonna be paying super close attention to her surroundings
Hate to be that guy but yeah, second panel, backwards hand. If you feel the need to fix it, it’d be easiest to just raise the right arm in the first panel so it’s wrapped around the tree. You’ve already got a perfect patch of open background there to work with.
Where did you get those checkers, Nosilla?
I love Nosilla… I love her…
Derek, you’ve seen Alison faint/loose consciousness two times within the past few days and almost faint earlier today, she’s not gonna be paying super close attention to her surroundings
I think he noticed her .2 second freakout in panel 5. Good eye.
Ngl I thought she was making eye contact with Nosilla and miming choking herself, like a shared moment of “this guy will not stfu”
Oh, he’s one of my people, an animation nerd!
Less talking, more checkers!
Hate to be that guy but yeah, second panel, backwards hand. If you feel the need to fix it, it’d be easiest to just raise the right arm in the first panel so it’s wrapped around the tree. You’ve already got a perfect patch of open background there to work with.
Nice catch; fixed!
the linework
is
so
good
She wasn’t kidding! =D
https://brainchild.suzannegeary.com/comic/chapter-2-page-8/
The page layout… the coloring!! Its all fantastic