Chapter 3 Page 38
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Brainchild
by Suzanne Geary
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I really appreciate the break this gives the reader to just appreciate someone like Derek being so supportive and expressing it so well.
Half-man, half-Garfunkle, all heart
Wife
Humans and their monsters seem to be completely interchangeable, inhabiting the same place in space and time and having the same mind. But Derek still has a human side even in the warped dimension. At first i thought it was because he didn’t render properly in Allison’s view, but now it seems more intentional. Is he similar to Allison? Did their monsters get separated from them because of the trials, and Derek’s didn’t separate all the way because he was plucked out before it happened? Or were they chosen for the trials because they weren’t fully monsters from the beginning? I really want to know the answers and that’s why I love this comic.
Also, Derek cute
Nosilla is that some kind of face
No si ll A
Ugh the color scheme is SO GOOD
also this sweet conversation. As much as I understand Allison here I relate so hard to Derek.
OH WAIT I TRIED TOO HARD TO CONNECT BUT I WANT TO RESPECT YOUR BOUNDARIES REALLY….. *spirals into anxious self-recrimination*
There you are young lady do you know how long I have been waiting on this stoop for you!?
Please tell me because I think I only exist within your immediate perception and I have just NO idea myself.
Hey, I just wanted to point out smth that kind of got me in the phrasing of this page. Derek basically said, “hey you could totally just not pursue the whole thing,” and Allison’s response of “but I think I’m going to have to” makes it feel like she’s saying “but I think I’m going to have to (not pursue the whole thing)” bc it’s in response to what he’s just said. Maybe for clarity, add a line for him in the end abt like “…instead of continuing to pursue this” or smth like that, bringing it back to that point and making it clearer that that’s the part that Allison’s responding to? Idk man you’re the writer I just wanted to bring that up
Keep doing what you do, dude! This comic is super interesting and I love the mood you have managed to convey within it. Some wonderful storytelling and realistic, nuanced character interactions going on here, and it is a joy to see.