even though allison went fucking 0 to 100 on carrie out of nowhere shes totally right though. but carrie is putting walls up because she developed feelings for allison too and doesnt know what to do about it and driving her away is easier than making herself vulnerable to someone shes known her whole life. oopsie poopsy!
I think this is maybe the fourth or fifth in a string of webcomics I was recommended to by other webcomics. Magnolia Porter of Monster Pulse sent a gleaming recommendation in the descriptions of a good few panels, and I’m glad to finally have made it up to speed. I love the comic so far- enough to binge it in a few days.
That’s pretty much how I find webcomics now.
Read a webcomic. Author mentions another webcomic they like. Read said webcomic.
Rinse and repeat. That and /co/
wait also, is this the “joke” nosilla was telling allison to learn how to take when she was taking out the trask? im getting confused on the timeline here
Hopefully constructive criticism is allowed here-
I have to admit that, the first time I read through this chapter, I didn’t comprehend it as being partially flashback. Looking back again, I see the fading from black to white background, but the first read through, it didn’t register.
Understandable—flashbacks are always a tricky thing to portray in the comic medium! That being said, I always write my chapters to make the most sense on a complete read-through, where not every detail will be immediately “gotten” page to page—so even if it took a re-read, I consider that a success. :)
ps—- pay close attention to Allison’s planner dates!
Oooooh shit I totally missed that it was a flashback at all – I interpreted the fade to black as just visual expression of it being later in the day. Allison asking for a reminder to drop that class, right after that scene of deciding the class was good idea, makes so much more sense now… I should’ve clued in to that sooner /lh
even though allison went fucking 0 to 100 on carrie out of nowhere shes totally right though. but carrie is putting walls up because she developed feelings for allison too and doesnt know what to do about it and driving her away is easier than making herself vulnerable to someone shes known her whole life. oopsie poopsy!
I think this is maybe the fourth or fifth in a string of webcomics I was recommended to by other webcomics. Magnolia Porter of Monster Pulse sent a gleaming recommendation in the descriptions of a good few panels, and I’m glad to finally have made it up to speed. I love the comic so far- enough to binge it in a few days.
That’s pretty much how I find webcomics now.
Read a webcomic. Author mentions another webcomic they like. Read said webcomic.
Rinse and repeat. That and /co/
“What, the cooler version of you?”
I’m gonna scream if this foreshadows Carrie dating Nosilla
wait also, is this the “joke” nosilla was telling allison to learn how to take when she was taking out the trask? im getting confused on the timeline here
that’s right! It should become more clear when we return to the “present” but this was Saturday, the trash incident is the Monday after.
Oh, we’re skipping days back and forth? Darn… didn’t catch that.
Yowzers
Right when she’s dealing with another version of herself, oof
So she doesn’t need to be open and honest, and she can just say incredibly hurtful things… right. That’s toxic AF, girl. RUN!
Allison WAS just also equally rude to her a mere moment earlier. ;)
I love Carrie’s face in panel 6. This is such a good comic! :>
Not the right time, Nosilla!
Idk man, Allison had a pretty good point in panel 2.
Hopefully constructive criticism is allowed here-
I have to admit that, the first time I read through this chapter, I didn’t comprehend it as being partially flashback. Looking back again, I see the fading from black to white background, but the first read through, it didn’t register.
Understandable—flashbacks are always a tricky thing to portray in the comic medium! That being said, I always write my chapters to make the most sense on a complete read-through, where not every detail will be immediately “gotten” page to page—so even if it took a re-read, I consider that a success. :)
ps—- pay close attention to Allison’s planner dates!
Can I ask why you didn’t want to put “Sunday” or “Saturday” in the margins?
Just enjoy trying to convey things diegetically! Same reason I don’t use thought bubbles. Just personal preference ;)
Oooooh shit I totally missed that it was a flashback at all – I interpreted the fade to black as just visual expression of it being later in the day. Allison asking for a reminder to drop that class, right after that scene of deciding the class was good idea, makes so much more sense now… I should’ve clued in to that sooner /lh
oh man. Nosilla just laughing at Allison’s pain, heh